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Blackjack87
Mar 3rd, 2005, 12:51 PM
Okay, so I'm writing a story for my made up characte and her besdt friendr and I've gotten stuck. I don't know who should show up at this point.

Should:

a) the brotherhood enter in and try to persuade her to join them, or

b) the x-men enter in and persuade her to join them.

Coice a would lead to the x-men getting there a few moments later and a fight breaking out with herand her best friend Rico right smack in the middle of it.

Choice b would lead to them getting to the Xavier Institute in the next chapter with a fight with brotherhood on the road and my girl and Rico get to show off a little of the feline side of their powers.

A little help please?

Oh, yeah one more thing. I will post chapter one as soon as it's done. so wait patiently, please.

Swift
Mar 3rd, 2005, 04:07 PM
brotherhood should convince her to join and then after a couple jobs she notices the evil of her ways, then go from there =)

Blackjack87
Mar 4th, 2005, 12:51 PM
What I meant by that was that she and Rico by what they knew of their powers was that could could transform into any of the feline breed, myth or real by way of their special talent with cats. I know it sounds confusing, but can you tell what I mean by it?
Have you noticed that I call her"her" or "she"? It's cause she hasn't got a real name yet. When they meets up with Professor Xavier, she gets a name. I hope to post her status and Rico's soon.
But either choice would lead them getting into a fight with the brotherhood, I just wasn't sure how to go about it. I was hoping you guys would help me decide.

Blackjack87
Mar 8th, 2005, 12:51 PM
I'll tell you guys what, I'll post a paragraph from both options and let you guys pick the best one.
I've been wanting to do an x-men story and this is my chance. Now I'm itching to continue it furthur and I can't wait any longer so I'm going to continue for a bit and produce a page from each idea, post them, and let you guys decide which one shall I continue on with.