WinnebagoWarrior
Mar 14th, 2005, 11:19 PM
OK this FanFic is about Reno's past and present. The Preweiw you read above was three years into his past. This FanFic also takes place in like Fuedal Japan or whatever. Reno is a Killer Ninja but as events take place (which you will see later on) Reno decides to change his ways and become a neutral factor in life. As Reno finally settles in a small hidden ninja village and begins his life of peace, something comes following him that will once again awaken his bloodlust....But for a different cause.
Based on that brief summary, what would you suggest i title it?
Here's a ROUGH draft of the first Chapter
~Chapter one~
As Reno stood out in a secluded field of tall uncut grass and wildflowers, a warm night breeze swept through the meadow, sending ripples through the grass giving the field an ocean effect. As the waves of grass break against his legs, a feeling of life spun around Reno as his silver hair blew against his face and the wind rushes by. As he stares into the night sky dotted with stars and one of the most beautiful wonders his eyes ever fell upon... The full blue Moon catches Reno's gaze and briefly entrances him with it's radiant light.
"..............................."
He then tears his gaze away from the starlit sky and slowly turns around. He slowly walks away heading west through the field towards the Calico border, leaving behind four lifeless bodies, all are clothed uniformly and wear the same dark cloak with the moon pendant. Without so much as a glance back Reno disappears into the night.
OK it's still not perfect but i made some minor changes as well as made as many correction i could find at the moment but i am contiueing to comb through it. once again any feed back is GREATLY appreciated.
Based on that brief summary, what would you suggest i title it?
Here's a ROUGH draft of the first Chapter
~Chapter one~
As Reno stood out in a secluded field of tall uncut grass and wildflowers, a warm night breeze swept through the meadow, sending ripples through the grass giving the field an ocean effect. As the waves of grass break against his legs, a feeling of life spun around Reno as his silver hair blew against his face and the wind rushes by. As he stares into the night sky dotted with stars and one of the most beautiful wonders his eyes ever fell upon... The full blue Moon catches Reno's gaze and briefly entrances him with it's radiant light.
"..............................."
He then tears his gaze away from the starlit sky and slowly turns around. He slowly walks away heading west through the field towards the Calico border, leaving behind four lifeless bodies, all are clothed uniformly and wear the same dark cloak with the moon pendant. Without so much as a glance back Reno disappears into the night.
OK it's still not perfect but i made some minor changes as well as made as many correction i could find at the moment but i am contiueing to comb through it. once again any feed back is GREATLY appreciated.