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Lomesir22
Jul 5th, 2005, 08:01 AM
Hey ya'll. During exams, Sekhma Bakura suggested that I use some of my creative energy and write Naruto Fan Poetry. Look at what I got:

Uchiha

Now I'm done
I'll go play
How many kids can I kill today?

I run, I strike
I raze, I end
Shinobi to the afterlife send.

Red eye, black eye
This eye mirror
In how many hearts will I strike fear?

This isn't about any particular Uchiha, but rather the grim outlook that plagued that clan.

Testimony of a Renegade Ninja

Today as my enemy I did sight
I took up quite a fright
And then how my feet took flight
Perhaps the others stayed to fight
Stronger than mine was their might
But against that ninja they were slight
All had perished by that night
Alas, once again I was right
But the rules of my village are rather tight
Listen they didn't to my plight
They exiled me, called me Blight
And now, as this poem I write
My future is not longer bright
I cannot see the light.

That last one is rather odd, no? For all who don't know, a renegade ninja is one who runs away from his village, usually with hostility. This unnamed ninja was exiled for being a coward, and cannot "see the light".

More to come, btw.

LegendGenesis
Jul 5th, 2005, 09:03 AM
Pretty good, I'd like to hear more

Lomesir22
Jul 11th, 2005, 04:20 PM
On Sasuke

Our mission's up
We've reached the end
Could you be my friend again?

I searched all over
And now I've found
How hard it was to bring you around.

I've missed you lots
More than you know
With these words my emotions show.

I didn't lead the pack
The lazy boy did
Neji was there(God forbid).

So I'll ask you again
Will you come home?
Or will you forever in the dark roam?

Lomesir22
Jul 11th, 2005, 07:17 PM
Sorry I didn't clear that up. It's Naruto speaking now, and this mission that I'm referring to is the one where Shikamaru led the boys on a long trip to get Sasuke back from Orochimaru... eps 95-120(about)

Lomesir22
Jul 12th, 2005, 08:45 AM
Ah well... this wasn't meant to be said. It was more of what went unsaid. Maybe I'm just wierd- okay I AM wierd - but this is what I picked up during this arc. :D

Everina
Jul 12th, 2005, 10:34 PM
Loved the first one lol very good job keep up the good work!