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Goten4
Jul 15th, 2005, 03:09 AM
Demons of Percy

The day was cold and sunny, and the
people of percy were doing their normal
rutine for the day. Then all of a sudden a
comet fell from the sky, and destroyed
the town no one lived from the blast. A
couple days pass, not a soul in sight.
A spaceship from mars dropped in, with
all the demons that lived in the village
of percy. The demons of percy, then
started to rebuild the village. After all the
flames and ashes were gone, demons
then turned percy all around. Jut then,
the demon leader started to speak to her
people." I, Karen the demon leader, will
lead us into a new century."She also
added this to her speech" New rules will
apply to percy, from this point on.
No more bullshit, plus we will all walk around our
new village butt booty naked from now on."
A demon named Ray, boy he's a bad demon.
He thinks everyone should be a demon
just like himself, only one thing though Ray
enjoys to play around with demon games,
instead of making sure all the other demons
walk around butt booty naked.
FinalDragoon
Jul 15th, 2005, 12:13 PM
Cold AND Sunny? :p

Besides that little quirk - and even that's not a big deal it's pretty good.
Goten4
Jul 15th, 2005, 12:32 PM
Cold AND Sunny? :p

Besides that little quirk - and even that's not a big deal it's pretty good.

yes it can be cold and sunny at the same time, it happens a lot over here where i live in the winter.
FinalDragoon
Jul 15th, 2005, 12:51 PM
I'm just giving you a hard time. :p

NORMALLY on a sunny day, the massive amount of light produces warmth, but it's not always the case when you consider other weather conditions. XD
Goten4
Jul 15th, 2005, 01:33 PM
I was just stateing that is can happen, my boss said the samething and the next day it was very cold and the sun was out shining.
Homocide
Aug 5th, 2005, 11:14 AM
That was funny and strange at the same time.
Darksage
Aug 5th, 2005, 11:41 AM
:lol:
Think of the winter, the sun is out, but it's freezing -_-

Cool story.
Everina
Aug 7th, 2005, 09:25 PM
Very kewl story can't wait to read some more ^.^
DarkMagicianGrl
Aug 7th, 2005, 10:00 PM
Its good so far. Keep up the good work.
Darksage
Aug 7th, 2005, 11:57 PM
Yeah where's the rest?

Did you write anymore?