Some lyrics from Stevil.

[Stevil]

Okay, so I've written some lyrics, and need help deciding if I should use them or not. Here's a few of the songs. Please comment on them.

ALCOHOL:
I've given up on caring
crying myself to sleep
the simplest of things
ruin the greatest of dreams
I hate dependency
but I need you and me
please dont feel hate
all of it was fate

all I want is alcohol
give it here, I want it all
all I want is alcohol
pass it here, I'll drink it all

you just don't get what I'm saying
I loved you more then anything
but now you're gone
and all I feel is pain
in this endless fucked up game
the only relief
is one which I hate
fuck, it's just fate

all I want is alcohol
give it here, I want it all
all I want is alcohol
pass it here, I'll drink it all
all I want is alcohol
give it here, I want it all
all I want is alcohol
pass it here, I'll drink it all

SLIGHTLY HURTFUL:
I feel like the shit that comes out of my ass
You've depleted all my hope so fucking fast
I really wanted you to love me
I really wanted you to love me

I say I want you to be happy
But deep inside that was a fucking lie
I wanted you to be with me
But that won't ever happen, till I die

I hope he does you good, but no I don't
I wanna rip his fucking heart out, and step on it
Just like you did to mine, but I won't
It's right for you to, but not me

So I'll just sit here
Treat myself to another beer
Hoping I'll forget everything
Fuckit, I allready have

I don't give a fuck anymore
What the fuck's wrong, you stupid whore?
I don't give a fuck anymore
Leave me the fuck alone, you stupid whore!

Look what you did to me!
Look what you did to me!
Look what you did to me!
Do you even care?

SUCK ME OFF:
bitch i'm better then you
bitch you suck
bitch i'm better then you
bitch you suck

suckit!
suckit, suckit!
suckit!
suckit, suckit!

i love this
you hate it all
i love this
i'm havin a ball

suck me off!
suck me off!
suck me off!

bitch you better fuckin suck that cock
dont ever pretend like i have a lock
bitch you better fuckin suck that cock
you stupid muthafuckin bitch suck me off!

suckit!
suckit, suckit!
suckit!
suckit, suckit!

bitch

STUCK FALLING:
i keep thinking of this place
this dream that is no more
theres no way to get to it
no opening, no door
it hauts me everday
like it wants to return to say
how it wants me back to it
but i have to stay away
better things lie ahead every day to day

this dream has consumed me
completely away
i must go back to where i used to be
before i'm stuck here for stay
this dream has consumed me
completely away
i must go back to where i used to be
before i'm stuck here for stay

this dream is real
but its not to you only to me
yet its getting harder to feel
the door is closing
the windows are shut
the pain is subsiding
its not where you are its where i am
i'm going to fall

this dream has consumed me
completely away
i must go back to where i used to be
before i'm stuck here for stay
this dream has consumed me
completely away
i must go back to where i used to be
before i'm stuck here for stay
this dream has consumed me
completely away
i must go back to where i used to be
before i'm stuck here for stay
this dream has consumed me
completely away
i must go back to where i used to be
before i'm stuck here for stay

PHANTOM:
life is a black hole
watch it tumble and roll
we scream to try and escape
but it keeps sucking us in

watch and you'll believe
we're torn apart by dreams
dreams we can never have...
again

this phantom pulls me in
erasing all I know
I pretend it doesn't show
but in the end its gone

swallow me in
this phantom will win
unless I act...
today

my consciousness is gone
all that's here is shame
my past is missing

this phantom pulls me in
erasing all I know
I pretend it doesn't show
but in the end its gone
this phantom pulls me in
erasing all I know
I pretend it doesn't show
but in the end its gone

fight my consciousness
fight the phantom
fight my consciousness
fight the phantom

this phantom pulls me in
erasing all I know
I pretend it doesn't show
but in the end its gone

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[DarkMagicianGrl]

holy guacomole. (sp) those are all really good. ilike the 1st one best myself...but dang.

[Darksage]

HAH.

Dude those are awesome.

I like "Alcohol" and "Stuck Falling"

[Swift]

God, good poetry with wrong topics. I likey!

[Darksage]

Its the sort of thing we come to expect from Stevil

[DarkMagicianGrl]

Thats 'cause Stevil is amazing. As are those there pieces of work.

[Stevil]

Thanks everyone. ^_^

I'm lovin' the comments.

I'll have to add more songs soon.

[Darksage]

Yeah show more. MORE!.

(thinks of strange titles Stevil has for them)

[Jester]

kickASS. first one is best.

[Stevil]

A few more lyrics. I don't think they're as good as the first ones, but I posted them to get your feedback on them.

DRUNK:
I'm so fuckin drunk
so fuckin wasted
I just want another drink

I'm so fuckin drunk
so fuckin wasted
too fucked up to even think

Somebody get me
another beer
Somebody help me
nothing's ever clear

am I going insane?
is this just a game?
I'm not normally like this
I just need some fucking help

I'm so fuckin drunk
so fuckin wasted
I just want another drink

I'm so fuckin drunk
so fuckin wasted
too fucked up to even think

Somebody help me
nothing's ever clear
somebody get me
another beer

am I going insane?
is this another game?
I'm not normally like this
I just need a few more drinks

I'm so fuckin drunk
so fuckin wasted
I just want another drink

I'm so fuckin drunk
so fuckin wasted
too fucked up to even think

I'm drunk
so very drunk
I'm drunk
so very drunk
I'm drunk
so very drunk
I'm drunk
so fucking drunk!

THE HOMOPHOBIC GAY MAN:
I'd like everyone to know
right now
I'm not gay

But if I was
I'd stand up
for every last right of mine

But I'm not
so it doesn't matter

I'm a homophobic person
and I'm really proud

I'm a homophobic gay man
I'm a homophobic gay man
I think gays are gross
but I'm one of them

I like to avoid
gay people
alot

I'm not a libber
Don't giver a shitter
So fuck you all

Not a democrat
Not a republican
Just me

I'm not gay
not straight
and proud of it!

I'm a homophobic gay man
I'm a homophobic gay man
I think gays are gross
but I'm one of them

THE EMO SONG:
breaking through the barricades
the aquardness has been filtered by my rage
fuckit all, it all can die
my heart's been swallowed by pride

i made you feel good
but didn't get the same fate
you'll get what you should
dead as fuck while i'm filled with hate

I was put in this world
to temporarily appease you
you're all in my mind
i'm ignoring you now

i made you feel good
but didn't get the same fate
you'll get what you should
dead as fuck while i'm filled with hate

i realise now
you're just a whore
and that's all you'll ever be
i realise now
you're just a whore
and you never cared about me

[Swift]

Their all shibby!! Weird lyrics, but good for a laugh =-)

[Darksage]

:rofl: :lol:

Those are sweet

I like "DRUNK" the most :poketoung

[Stevil]

Thanks. ^_^

I'll try to have more up soon.

[.GalerianRion.]

Keh, these are very good ~ If my brain wasn't going through a crash, I'd...give constructive crit or opinion on it, but since it's not...

I really enjoyed the first few that you posted up and "The Emo Song" and some of them are odd (not in a bad way) but still good lol. Look forward to see more of them~