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Jester
Aug 10th, 2005, 11:11 PM
Pain. Pain beyond pain. Demons from past days have reawakened. They are dying to e let out. They are craving to feel the night's air once more. To hear the quivering sniffs of pain. They want to be freed by one slice. One sclice to end it all. One sclice to spill these demons unto the ground in a red mess. Shall I do it? Neigh. I ahve swornd an oath. I have sworn this to a figure. An angelic figure, if you will. Perfect in every sense. Someone who makes the stars shine brighter and the crickets chirp louder. Someone who fills my darkest days with joy. Angelic figure, will you be my new refuge? Will you be my holy sanctuary that wards off these demons? Will you heal my wounds and hold me tight? Will you end my pain?
~*Dedicated*~
Everina
Aug 10th, 2005, 11:34 PM
Wow awsome poem hope that person will love it!
Shrine
Aug 18th, 2005, 06:10 AM
Aww, what a great poem. Has that special someone seen this, yet?
Rev
Aug 18th, 2005, 11:14 AM
I like it, and if you havent shown it to the special someone yet you should.
carmel&carmelita
Aug 18th, 2005, 05:24 PM
Great work keep it up also to see more of your work^^
DarkMagicianGrl
Aug 18th, 2005, 05:31 PM
Wow. Thats really good. Just...wow
Homocide
Aug 19th, 2005, 11:42 AM
wow,very deep. you should write some more stuff and write it in a book.
Stephine
Aug 19th, 2005, 11:48 AM
O.O..um...wow...I mean wow! That was soooo good that i can't find words to describe it.
Darksage
Aug 20th, 2005, 09:46 PM
Perfection has been attained
James
Aug 21st, 2005, 06:43 PM
It's pretty nice.
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