Little Poetry..

[.GalerianRion.]

Well...it's only two...but eh...I'm not very fond of them but oh well, lol



Blood Stained Iris

I see things other people can't see
I hear things, that I shouldn't hear
I dream things, that are too real to be called... "dreams"
What I see, hear and dream drives me to madness
A power I can't control.
Do you wish to see what I see?
Then see through this blood-stained iris...

- There's actually an image that goes to this...if you want to see it... you can ask...

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HateYou.exe

I am violent
I am dark
I am an artist
I'm protective
I don't fear death, but myself
I'm spiteful & full of malice
I am cruel and alone
Hating you is what I was made to do
What I am born to be, is an enemy to me and you
I hate therefore I am
I am only an .EXE, what do I know about feelings?

- Over my obsession with computerized stuff....nuff said...oh yeah...made this in 3 minutes around 5 minutes ago *is smacked* >.O;

[Everina]

kewl poems loved the second one the most.

[Darksage]

Yeah the second one is better than the first IMO.

Nice Job ;)

[DarkMagicianGrl]

Yea...I like the second best. Great work though.

[James]

Second is my favorite. Both are very interesting though..

[.GalerianRion.]

wow, I didn't think that many people would like the second one as much haha ~ (which is I like better out of the two myself o.O; )

Your comments are greatly appreciated :D Thankyou so much ^^

[gsv]

I've always sucked at poems, but those are quite nice. I remember last time when I had an assignment for a poem I had Hellspire help me ;D. Anyhow, once again, nice job!

-G

[.GalerianRion.]

Thankyou, I'm glad you think so ^^ :D

[Everina]

you're just like my sis she's better at making and thinking up poems than I am >.< can't wait to read some more of your work!

[Eagle]

Here are a few poems I've written.

Fate’s Enigma

A celestial abyss
Blazing with flames
Controlling my victims
Causing them pain

Destin their lives
As I enigmatically dwell
Casting their souls
To the darkness of hell

Fate is my name
Blind by my wrath
Writing your destiny
Drawing your path

In hell may you burn
Decaying by flames
My cryptic desire
Fate is my name

The End

Kill me slow
Kill me softly
Take the pain
Pinned inside me
The shadow of death
Has arrived
Now is the time
To sacrifice our lives
Broken, ashamed
A fate with no choice
Beaten, battered
Sounds from my weary voice
Locked away
As secrets unfold
With every cry
A story is told
The suffering of
The battles lost
The battle within
Each of us
The victor is them
The darkness of hell
Our hindering thoughts
Is where they dwell
Plans of escape
To one day arise
Gain the evil of men
Back to their side
Bloodshed fields
Painted red
The world we have lost
The beginning has an end

A Soldier’s Farewell

Combustion of flames, with a razor edge
Blood bleached fields, stained with red
Obey your fate, an untimely death
Bodies lie down, souls put to rest
Darkness surrounds, as death takes place
The gates of hell, where demons await
Murderous spirits, young and free
Grasping the thoughts, of you and me
As the smoke clears, a valley of hell
All that remains, is a soldier’s farewell

Satan’s Beast

A thunderous force
Mysterious and strange
Seven heads
Sharpened fangs
Ten horns
At top, resting crowns
The dragon’s feet
Is where it bows
Satan’s beast
Fire-filled eyes
Devouring the truth
Spreading it’s lies
A couple months pass
As the first death comes
Cast to the pit
Burned up and gone




Corrupted Cull

A defying burden
Blinds my eyes
Chokes my voice
Helps me die
My defected discretion
My corrupted cull
The missing of love
Make’s my life dull
A stodgy summer
I now must face
Inflated with grieve
Deflated of grace
Awaken the spirit
Take back what’s mine
Time to take charge
As I breathe one last time

[Darksage]

Um can you make your own thread for them?

thanks

[Eagle]

What's the point of that?

[Darksage]

Each person has their own thread for their own stuff

[carmel&carmelita]

YOu did a great job." I really love the Second the most^^

[.GalerianRion.]

Whooaaa ._O ...lot more posts in this thread since I last saw it.

Everina: Thankyou ^_^ I'm glad you like them :D

Eagle: Your poems are very nice :) well written

carmel&carmelita: Thankyou ^_^


Wow, "Thankyou" is all I can come up with, but I do mean it, it means so much that people enjoy what I wrote (and commented of course) :D

[FinalDragoon]

So humble Kat. :p

You've always had a talent when it comes to literature.

tru.dat

[Akira Raine]

Yeah Rion that's so friggin awesome!! You rock at poems!!

tru.dat

XD (sorry couldn't help myself since maxx said that)

[.GalerianRion.]

FinalD: Well thankyou.....your still a whore <_< but you already knew that >_>


Akira: Lol thankyou Laura, you could have told me this when sitting next to me in comp class instead of posting it :P lol xD;

[ihateclowns17]

" A STONE HEART"
These hatin feelings that bubble inside
the night you left me with more tears to cry
you denied our love, it was easy to say
I wish it would just go away

You stabbed my heart with your arrogance and pride
you were just a jerk who didnt care what I was feelin inside

my feelings soon grew with pain and hate,
that my heart became this monster of irate

my heart was then turned into stone,
no beat, was heard from this silent tone
I knew that I was meant to be alone
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A love exists, fading by shyness,
The only thing preventing this rose from bloom is

our silence
I see your face from time to time,
these words from within, I cant seem to find
from your stance, just a glimpse or stare
in my soul a longing, a feeling of despair"