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Everina
Sep 8th, 2005, 01:51 AM
A random poem I thought up from my head O.O
+Flying with Broken wings+

A girl who was kind and was kindhearted like no other.
Flying with Broken Wings,
By a single hand a light shines through opening a gate.

Beautiful and yet sad her wings extends looking full of life,
How does she do it?
Always full of life nothing that stops her from,
Ever feeling optimistic and happy in what she does.

An Angel filled with dreams and hopes for whats to come.
Flying with Broken Wings,
Always giving her all, her determination, and giving her kindness to all.
Never leaving anyone behind.

A Angel who thinks of her family, friends, and putting others before herself.
Always keeping in mind she'll always stay by her friends side,
Near where within the Gate which keeps her locked from the outside world.

Sleeping in a deep sleep without any life.
Flying with Broken wings,
Finding her past,
Has her life been all a lie..a dream perhaps?

Perhaps nothing in her life was real at all.
A song which goes through her head again and again,
Repeating itself never stopping.

Giving her hope and strength,
Filling in the empty spots as the tune repeats from within her.
Awakening from her deep sleep she begins to,
Fly with Broken Wings.

Darksage
Sep 8th, 2005, 05:25 PM
Nice poem
I like ones that dont rhyme for some reason

It has a pretty good plot

8/10

DarkMagicianGrl
Sep 8th, 2005, 07:17 PM
Hmm...its alright. Not sure if its really my taste but it is good. ^_^

7.5/10

Mystic-Spirit
Sep 8th, 2005, 07:50 PM
Cool Poem.Nice little plot behind it.