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Darksage
Jul 14th, 2006, 05:01 PM
Something originally intended to be a song that then drifted to a poem. :laugh:



Half asleep I hear a voice,
Is it only in my mind,
Or is it someone calling me,
Someone I failed and left behind. . .

Like a circus on parade,
Seldom close enough to see,
I wander through an angry crowd,
I wonder what's become of me. . .

To work it out I let them in,
All the good and bad I've been,
All the devils that disturbed me,
And the angels that defeated them somehow.

Come together in me now.

Roll on thunder, shine on lighting,
The days are long and the nights are frightening,
Nothing matters anyway and that's the hell of it.

Winter comes and the winds blow colder,
Some grow wiser, you just grew older,
You never listened anyway and that's the hell of it.
Good for nothing, bad in bed,
Nobody likes you and you're better off dead,
Goodbye, Goodbye,
We've all come to say goodbye,
Born defeated, died in vain,
Super destructive, you were hooked on pain,
And though your music lingers on,
Well, all of us are glad you're gone.

If I could live my life half as worthlessly as you,
I'm convinced that I'd wind up burning too.

Loved yourself as you loved no other,
Be no man's fool, be no man's brother,
But were all born to die alone, you know, that's the hell of it.

Life's a game with it bound to beat you,
In times of grief, it can turn to cheat you,
But we'd only waste it anyway, and that's the hell of it.

Stephine
Jul 14th, 2006, 09:07 PM
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow*needs to breath*

that was really good. deep.

Darksage
Jul 16th, 2006, 12:41 AM
Thanks Steph ^_^

I might post other stuff... :ninja:

Atem
Jul 16th, 2006, 02:43 AM
Post more! =]

Darksage
Jul 17th, 2006, 02:59 PM
Alright.


Dove

The ugliest thing can turn into the most beautiful creature,
The prettiest thing can bring the most pain,
My sorrow is represented by a natural force,
It comes in the form of rain.
I am that beautiful creature,
That shows, not causes pain,
I feel the most secure,
When ever I see the rain.
The essence of who I am is gone,
I live in a glass room where everyone can see
That the person living inside,
Is not the true me.
True love is when you say you need me like I need you
Or so Faith says,
But true hurt is all that I have been through.
My heart has been beaten, battered, and bruised to the core,
So I don’t have a heart anymore,
An artificial one beats in its place,
So when you look at me,
There's a fake expression on my face
Well at least the happy ones are fake.
Similar to losing one sense and gaining strength in another,
I have come to master the trait, of emulating another
Artificial love cant exist
I just feel the silence and cling to it,
Its my redeemer from the pain.
As if I’m falling into the dark abyss, I scream but no one hears,
You see,
My glass room is sound proof,
No one can hear my tears.

Yet you see me crying and no assistance,
You just stare and wonder why,
Such a beautiful thing can exist,
And why this dove cries.

Atem
Jul 17th, 2006, 05:15 PM
My fav. poem. ^_^

Stephine
Jul 22nd, 2006, 11:48 AM
O_O *ish speachless*...once again WOW! That was amazing!!! awesome awesome!!! jeez you write music and now poems, what next? lol

myami
Jul 27th, 2006, 02:09 PM
wow tis excellent! :)
i read the first one, and it went ".. and that's the hell of it"
my sentiments exactly (on life that is).

keep posting~
and i'll keep clapping here :)

pmaster4
Jul 27th, 2006, 02:32 PM
Nice you got talent man
I look forward to your next work

SapphireStar
Aug 6th, 2006, 03:25 AM
Oh man! That is so great! I love it, write more, I'd love to see more of the things you write

SteveYzerman
Aug 18th, 2006, 01:20 PM
wow lol alot to read

Mantis
Aug 18th, 2006, 03:32 PM
could you lend me some of your talent :P i d show girls how romantic i am :) lol my last girlfriend kept telling me that i lacked romance however i always took her to the beach at night and we jsut sat down and hear the waves go to nice french restaurants but what the heck she still maybe wanted me to be romantic cuz that is superficial i d use some lessons or some writing i d find a way to copyright you lol anw but i d rather have some lessons lol

carmel&carmelita
Oct 12th, 2006, 05:04 PM
Great work ^^ I love the first you put a lot of feeling to it but then again you also put feeling into the second also. Well I’ll have to say that I love the first and also the second… You’re a truth writer in poetry YAY I can’t wait to see more of your work ^^

masrur
Oct 12th, 2006, 05:55 PM
So beautiful *cries*

Turaizuru-san
Oct 14th, 2006, 10:48 PM
/snaps fingers in an appreciative manner

Good show. Very good. If you do, indeed, set music to those lyrics, I would be interested in hearing it.

I had a little tune/chord progression going on in my head as I read them...but I do that with pretty much everything